I am not in a run. These times settle me to rest.
you are making wonderful Haikus and Tankas...I wish I could Translate it in English..."If not yoursI wishI were for river"see how awkward it sounds...
Yeah ratein ..yeah mausam...Nadi Ka kinaara...yeah chanchal hawa..
if not yourswould I be the rivers?
if not yoursthe river's
still mine holds the best :)
yours is good but it doesn't actually translate my intent...although that again is unnecessary..still the question mark in your piece makes it mean differently
well said tukun... you got the form right and closest to the original...
no but still mine reads the best
Hi dear...if not yours...don't worry...next time..
If not of you,Of the river's, would I be?
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you are making wonderful Haikus and Tankas...
I wish I could Translate it in English...
"If not yours
I wish
I were for river"
see how awkward it sounds...
Yeah ratein ..yeah mausam...
Nadi Ka kinaara...
yeah chanchal hawa..
if not yours
would I be the
rivers?
if not yours
the river's
still mine holds the best :)
yours is good but it doesn't actually translate my intent...although that again is unnecessary..
still the question mark in your piece makes it mean differently
well said tukun... you got the form right and closest to the original...
no but still mine reads the best
Hi dear...
if not yours...
don't worry...
next time..
If not of you,
Of the river's, would I be?
If not of you,
Of the river's, would I be?
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